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Escape

Meg needs to get out, NOW

Category: Drama - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/16 - Updated: 2007/01/16 - 180 words - Complete

Reviews

• Escape

  (#) Cerediwen 2007-01-16 09:09:32 AM

  See you should do more on that one as well!!! There is a pattern in what you write Ali

  Author's response

  yeah ive noticed that too...

• Escape

  (#) Silvana 2007-01-17 11:32:07 PM

  And that was just the biggest mistake...
  
  You know what I mean. ;)

• Escape

  (#) BFCIV 2007-01-22 01:42:20 PM

  Well damn, thats a hell'uva way to begin a story. I liked it. Now it has me guessing who they are, and why "they" started shooting at Meg. So many question but I think you'll do an excellent job explaining that in later chapters. Plus I think you have a great sense of urgency in action with your narrative.

  Author's response

  sorry, but it was just a random oneshot!! i'm not very good at doing the longer stories, they tend to drag on and get boring.

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