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Escape

by Alyss 3 reviews

Meg needs to get out, NOW

Category: Drama - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Published: 2007-01-16 - Updated: 2007-01-16 - 180 words - Complete

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Escape

(#) Cerediwen 2007-01-16

See you should do more on that one as well!!! There is a pattern in what you write Ali
Author's response
yeah ive noticed that too...
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(#) Silvana 2007-01-17

And that was just the biggest mistake...

You know what I mean. ;)
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(#) BFCIV 2007-01-22

Well damn, thats a hell'uva way to begin a story. I liked it. Now it has me guessing who they are, and why "they" started shooting at Meg. So many question but I think you'll do an excellent job explaining that in later chapters. Plus I think you have a great sense of urgency in action with your narrative.
Author's response
sorry, but it was just a random oneshot!! i'm not very good at doing the longer stories, they tend to drag on and get boring.

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