(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-16At first I thought the lyric references in the dialog were a bit too much. BUT since they aren't actual lyrics at the time they're using them it's totally ok, I think. ;)
And the whole thing being an inspiration for Pete to write: super! :)
Author's responseyeah. he's using the argument as influence for the new record. yeah. haha.
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-01-17wow i loved how used the lyrics that is so cool! muters to self why couldn't I have thought of that....ahem but anyhoo....i love how optimistic Patrick is about the whole situation. it made me giggle even though i'd prolly prefer Patty Cakes as a brother:S ah well....keep up the good work can't wait for the next bit!!!
Author's responsehaha thank you! i'm going to post another chappy tomorrow but then i wont be able to update til sunday maybe. were sposed to be getting a big snow storm. blah. haha.
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