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by aiIenzo 5 Reviews

These are lyrics I wrote, oh, maybe a year ago. Based loosely off of Gerard and Bert's relationship. (strong language)

Category: Poetry - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Crossover, Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/21 - Updated: 2007/01/21 - 343 words - Complete

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    (#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-01-21 05:24:21 PM

    My mouth hung open in utter awe for the entire time. shakes head This should be made into a song. It's lyrics without the music. It needs a melody. Geez. That was amazing. And I love Gerard/Bert relationship stories. Bert's hot. And so's Gee. And so's this poem-lyric-thingy. Well, let me rephrase that. This story thingy is beautiul. I love you.

    Author's response

    Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
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    (#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-01-28 11:42:28 AM

    woah!...that's really quite (very) powerful :)
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    (#) horsie890 2007-03-10 09:44:22 PM

    You need to do the following:
    a] Put the pictures on your profile using photobucket (thanks to SafeFromRobots for the help with that).
    b] Get a melody for this.
    c] Get a recording contract.
    d] Get the two singers mentioned in this.
    e] Force me to shut up.

    Author's response

    a] That's a LOT of pictures, haha
    b] gots me a melody
    c] working on it
    d] oh, how I wish...
    e] I'd NEVER force you to shut up. Thanks for the review! xo
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    (#) Cerediwen 2007-03-20 12:08:47 PM

    I love that...is shell shocked Seriously that is amazing!
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    (#) xmcrmentalx 2010-01-06 08:13:19 AM

    omg u have a melody to this ?
    i HAVE to hear it ... sits in a corner and rocks
    u shuld post it somewhere, it'll b amazin with a good melody to it :O !! xxx

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