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No Ring On *MY* Finger
12 ReviewsTruly, Pete's just beating himself up. Really. I'm so beat. But two chapters in one night it good, right? hellz yeah. now sing it, hat man. ba-ba-ba-ba-ba.
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I'm Still On My Own
(#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-22 11:24:38 PM
First review,
AGAIN.
:o Haunting dreamness.
Creeeepepyy.
Well at least we know Evie&&Pete arn't going to be bored anytime soon.
Ha, indeed.
Two updates = Love,
Love = Ev.
Haha, We love Ev. -
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(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-23 04:36:50 AM
Ich liebe es!
One thing that kinda bums me out, though, is that baby Alex's command of English seems to be a lot better than mine. ;)
Love this story and the complexity of big character cast. :)
I almost feared that Starbucks Joe robbed ficwad off its Queen. sniff -
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(#) AshleyChaotic 2007-01-23 06:17:09 AM
Freakin a, what other dramallama do you have for these two. Damn, I would've given up already haha.
YAY FOR CAMEOS!
And YAY for baby Alex and her cuteness. -
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(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-23 07:52:21 AM
two updates=frigging awesome
The amount of cuteness reading Petey interact with baby Alex=awwww! -
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(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-23 04:31:54 PM
So good!
I absolutely love baby Alex. I can just picture her so perfectly in my head. And creepy dead sis? Yikes!
I need more!! -
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(#) Lindsay_007 2007-01-23 07:01:53 PM
I really dont know which thing you wrote was more eloquent:
"Upon parting, both our eyes opened and as our lips fell open in a slight outstanding for the other, our noses brushed and I'm sure both our eyes had the same glimmer of love mixed with a hint of confusion.
Did we break a rule?"
OR
"Being raped by Pete while he was asleep was not part of my to-do list."
LOL! just joking. the first is pretty much the prettiest thing i think you have written. "A slight outstanding"? BRILLIANTLY worded. (but sleepy pete was priceless :D) KUDOS MUCHO GRANDE! -
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(#) SZSmith 2007-01-23 08:35:53 PM
raping during sleep?
ohman.
haha, i loovveedd this chapter.
what am i talking about? I love them all.
I'm going to get on the new locked chapter like really soon because i've been a bad girl and slacking [midterms, me falling asleep]
so yea. soooonnn, i hope. -
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(#) poisonedhalo 2007-01-24 05:07:10 AM
wow. ok yes that conversation needs to be continued. god i love ur writing. no joke. ok update soon n keep me happy.