After the concert Monica and Gerard spend time together alone, well sort of alone.
I think you need to cut back on the amount of sex scenes, i liked it better when the sex scenes were once every three chapters or something, now it's every chapter.
Either or, it's still very good. :)
awsome soo hooootttt! can wait to read the next one!
hey just me again saying great chapter!
Nice...that is a hell of a lot of nervous energy...
i loved the beginning, guys were so themselves. Gee was so cute,Bob was adorably grumpy,Frank and Mikey were hilaaaarious while talkin bout weddingstuff, and so on and so on:D
keep it comiin.
for the record, i love all the sex. in real life, people have sex, a lot. So it's more realistic that way. love it!
This should be rated NC-17.
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