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The Heir

A post HBP story, a Harry/Hermione romance. A one-shot at the moment, I reserve the right to expand it in the future

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Harry, Hermione - Warnings: [!!] [V] [X] - Published: 2007/01/28 - Updated: 2007/01/28 - 3116 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Heir

  (#) sweetgirl 2007-01-28 03:25:50 PM

  Nice story. I would like to see a sequel or for the story to continue.

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  (#) DarkeGray 2007-01-28 05:23:02 PM

  While not exactly original, it had a lot of ideas from other stories, it was still a good story, if a little rushed. I do like the idea of a more relaxed Hermione while she is at home though. Overall, it was a good summary of a last book, the sniper rifle is also a good addition, I've seen a few stories do that idea.

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-01-28 10:42:00 PM

  An enjoyable read, though somewhat rushed in spots; I suspect it could comfortably be expanded and fleshed out with a few more chapters, at a minimum.
  
  I did enjoy the depiction of the "at home" Hermione and she certainly seems plausible as I could see where she'd be a bit uptight and driven in the wizarding world. An expansion and/or a sequel would be worth it if the muse strikes you.

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  (#) merle_c 2008-06-29 08:38:56 PM

  A nice little one off. It was interesting to see a glimpse of Hermione at home. For that part alone, it might be worth revisiting in more detail. It would be quite difficult to come up with a novel way for Harry to beat Voldemort at this point, but the quick, methodical sniper on his way to the hospital to see the birth of his child is an excellent one in my opinion! Thanks for sharing.

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  (#) koppe 2009-01-03 07:42:10 AM

  Great little story... I very much hope you'll write a sequel set in the same universe. Keep up the great the work!

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  (#) dennisud 2009-05-28 04:41:35 AM

  Pleas continue as the rest iof the DE's are either going after the new family and/or Harry will hunt them down to give himself & Harmione a chance to live!
  
  dennisud

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  (#) NvLgNr 2011-07-28 02:58:42 AM

  Nice. Why not have them have a daughter while at it? But instead of having more violence such as DEs going after more people, why not make it more relaxed such as where they continue to live their lives together with their son (and daughter if you decide to give them a daughter) leading to their kids going to Hogwarts and becoming quidditch stars? I hope there is more chapters to this to come.

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