Categories > Books > Harry Potter > The Heir7 Reviews
A post HBP story, a Harry/Hermione romance. A one-shot at the moment, I reserve the right to expand it in the future
- While not exactly original, it had a lot of ideas from other stories, it was still a good story, if a little rushed. I do like the idea of a more relaxed Hermione while she is at home though. Overall, it was a good summary of a last book, the sniper rifle is also a good addition, I've seen a few stories do that idea.
- An enjoyable read, though somewhat rushed in spots; I suspect it could comfortably be expanded and fleshed out with a few more chapters, at a minimum.
I did enjoy the depiction of the "at home" Hermione and she certainly seems plausible as I could see where she'd be a bit uptight and driven in the wizarding world. An expansion and/or a sequel would be worth it if the muse strikes you.
- A nice little one off. It was interesting to see a glimpse of Hermione at home. For that part alone, it might be worth revisiting in more detail. It would be quite difficult to come up with a novel way for Harry to beat Voldemort at this point, but the quick, methodical sniper on his way to the hospital to see the birth of his child is an excellent one in my opinion! Thanks for sharing.
- Nice. Why not have them have a daughter while at it? But instead of having more violence such as DEs going after more people, why not make it more relaxed such as where they continue to live their lives together with their son (and daughter if you decide to give them a daughter) leading to their kids going to Hogwarts and becoming quidditch stars? I hope there is more chapters to this to come.