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The Darkness

Darkness overwhelms the band. They meet some new people. Can they survive through the peril?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Horror - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/01/28 - Updated: 2007/01/28 - 395 words

Reviews

• The Darkness

  (#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-01-29 02:07:00 PM

  You know was pleasantly surprised by this. Good job. My only tip is to space out the sentences and conversations so that it's not bunched together. It's easier to read that way, and makes your story seem longer than it is. ;) Which is a good thing. But otherwise, great job and please continue.

• The Darkness

  (#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-01-29 02:07:13 PM

  You know was pleasantly surprised by this. Good job. My only tip is to space out the sentences and conversations so that it's not bunched together. It's easier to read that way, and makes your story seem longer than it is. ;) Which is a good thing. But otherwise, great job and please continue.

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