In an attempt of suicide, you somehow wound up in a league of cloaked warriors. They called themselves Nobodies, and seemed to have the goal of becoming whole once more. Seeing as you still had a h...
(#) SakurasSong 2007-07-09 09:34:36 AMGreat story! My _(color)_ eyes were glued to my computer screen the whole time I was reading.
I like how you're using second person pesrspective (you, you're, etc.). The only thing that bugged me was the whole _(color)_ and _(name)_ thing, but I got used to it as I kept reading. Please add the next chapter soon!!!! ^-^