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Chapter Eight

finding a way out?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Horror - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/01/30 - Updated: 2007/01/30 - 847 words

Reviews

• The Darkness

  (#) Clinga 2007-01-30 02:35:23 PM

  OH NO, Brendon attacked Davey!! First Ryan got hurt, and maybe Davey!~takes deep breath~ I can't wait to read the next chapter! 8)

  Author's response

  hope you like the next chapter then. =) i'm going to write it when i get done with this lol.

• The Darkness

  (#) xXlifesapartyXx 2007-01-30 03:34:43 PM

  wow... ummm... you deffinately dont describe much any more... i just noticed that... lol... js... and i'm just gonna voice my opinion here... but i think you're spacing your chapters out a little too much... but thats just my preference on it... x_x...

  Author's response

  sighs im trying jez....and also i don't think i am cause (this is my opinion) when i try to read ones that are in paragraphs i get lost to easy. and yeah i'm trying to get the discriptions in there but i don't want to be TOO discriptive...

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