she was there and then she was gone
Usually I like sex scenes, not in a perverted way. For some reason this one made me frustrated. In a good way. I don't think any other story has played with my emotions the way this one does. I love it. Can you please update soon?
you...and Gerard Way...are my new heroes. Oh-my-god. This chapter returned faith in me that there ARE good stories out there. Incredible! Beautiful! Wonderful! The end of this chapter is perfect. Incredible job...and please, for the love of good writing, update soon.
Whoa, was not expecting that! I would love to get inside her head and see things how she does for a while, you wrote this brilliantly. Amazing job Cal.
wow, that was crazy. cought me by surprise totally. i just thought she'd leave. But thats just boring..now that i think aout it. this is amazing. updates soon maybe?
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