Finally! What happens next after chapter 1!
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-01-31 07:33:26 AMOK, I have to say that you watched TOP GUN way too many times. This chapter was absolutely insane. But I am curious on just how much further you're going to be going with this story before you start the next. Let me know.
Author's responseWho hasn't seen Top Gun way too many times? I answered your question in a PM, but the story goes on for 5-7 more chapters and sets up the sequel which is Harry's return to England.~Jim
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-01-31 07:42:06 AMDecent enough update, a bit worse than the last one, but still good.
Bill's letter to the Order was great. I was wondering when they'd find out, and how. Hope to get some reactions from them and Luna before too long.
Author's responseSorry you felt it wasn't up to standards anything in particular you felt was a letdown? Notice Bill didn't tell the Order how they got into the city. Harry told Luna, that may come back to haunt him...
(#) Pixie 2007-02-01 07:46:43 PMWow, I love it. My favourite character would have to be Collins. He's just like me. Sarcastic, very sarcastic. He had a shitty life, with asshole's for family. His dad was a drunk, his mum hated him. Oh, and he loves guns. Can't forget the guns.
Author's responseThat's frightening, very frightening. Glad you like the story though.~Jim