"I have a boyfriend. He's been a very bad boy. I still love him, though." One-shot, more creepy than sad. READ!!!
(#) DizzyDior12 2007-02-05 06:55:41 PM
That's some sick shit. It was kind of hard to take seriously. Maybe you should delve deeper into her brain and thought process if you're going to take the scary, insane route. It would be more chilling that way. You should definitley play on the emotions of the characters if you want to improve the story. I liked the end, though.
(#) Fewli-xx 2007-02-09 02:48:31 AM
You're a really good writer. Kepp going!
(#) GoCryEmoKid 2007-03-03 04:09:21 PM
Eeeeek!!! She tortured him! that was FREAKY!
(#) MCM 2007-03-03 07:36:41 PM
HOLY SHIT!!! Never saw that one comin'. I...yeah. I WANT YOUR FUCKING MIND!!!!!
(#) dannii 2007-03-08 07:05:56 AM
wow that was good
(#) cc and dd 2007-03-18 11:17:32 PM
tha girl is inshan it scared my little sister and she had nightmares i kindo f liked it but it was a littl e to freaky for me and my little sister
I shat my pants
have another pair much?
heehee much love for
Girl your crazy but a very good writer. Loved it.
that made me shiver
i like the way it was writen