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Fifteen Years On

Fifteen years on, and things have changed for the former Xiaolin apprentices.

Category: Xiaolin Showdown - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Clay, Dojo, Kimiko, Omi, Raimundo - Published: 2005/08/28 - Updated: 2007/08/12 - 1157 words - Complete

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• Fifteen Years On

  (#) mimi 2005-08-29 09:22:49 PM

  nice...^.^

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  (#) mimi 2005-08-29 09:23:33 PM

  nice...^.^

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  (#) Jack Spicer, Prince of Darkness!! 2005-11-17 06:17:15 AM

  This was a pretty kewl fic, 'cept there was a LOT more you could do with it, like where is Jack-kun all this time?? You mentioned the monks got rid of evil like Wuya, but I don't think Jack really qualifies for that. Even considering it was a one-shot, there was so much more you could have done. Other than that, it was pretty nicely done. ^_^
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Hey, thanks for the review. I just wanted to reply because you said that there was a lot more I could have done with the story, which is very true. I left it the way it was because I wanted the story to be uncomplicated. Short and sweet.The only thing you mentioned though, was the lack of Jack. I personally am not a Jack fan, so I'm generally not inclined to write him in a good light, but I just didn't feel that within the short and quite closed context in which I wanted to write the story, that he fit. Jack wasn't needed for the story to continue on it's merry way. Somehow, from your name I get the feeling you might be a bit biased in Jacks favour, but I'll gladly overlook that, because I am the same in some of my other fandoms. But anyway, I just wanted to reply and say that metioning Jack for my purposes, would have served to add little to the story.Slán,'Mera

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  (#) Suzanne Barrientos 2006-03-03 06:48:13 PM

  Oh.. my..gosh ! that is beutiful
  I cried I can't wait to see it

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  (#) beautymourns 2006-03-23 05:15:50 PM

  Noticed a few typos, but I can sucessfully say this is the first piece of XS fic that I have read -been able to read- and enjoyed. I might recomend more dialogue tags to make it flow more easily, but besides that, it was very nicely done.

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  (#) Elizabeth 2006-06-13 02:51:42 PM

  Ehh I didn`t really like it I liked your other work a light in darkness something like that.And where the hell do you get of raimondo and kimiko drinkin beer?!

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  (#) avi17 2006-06-25 11:18:42 PM

  Although I can't stand the RaimundoxKimiko pairing, I still have to admit that this is cute. And if you can make me say that a RaixKim story is cute, then you're a pretty darn good writer.
  Enough said.
  ~Avi-chan

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  (#) Elizabeth 2006-06-27 12:24:28 PM

  I cant stand the thought of a raikim paring either.but goodness wise the story is good just not the couple.

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  (#) A Fan 2006-08-27 12:35:11 PM

  I liked very happy, but... what happened to Jack Spicer.

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  (#) /?/??//???? 2006-09-02 08:54:55 PM

  i think you should write when the baby is born

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