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Love Is Brutal
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-02
tears
you killed him...
why?
now who will keep my panty drawer in tact??
lol. yes, i am an idiot. haha really though, i liked the way you wrote this piece, even though dark isn't my thing.Author's response
lol, i know, i was feeling very sinister, hehe, glad you liked it xxLove Is Brutal
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-02
le gasp That was very good. Disturbing, yes. But I've seen worse. But this was really good. I like the way you set it up, with the centering. It was like part of the story. I liked the anger of Gerard, how you didn't know that it was Gerard until the end, and pretty much the whole thing. I'd like to critique you, but shrugs there's nothing TO critique. Good job.Author's response
lol, thanks for your review, my mate read it and she thought Gerard was gay, so I had to edit it slightly, hehe, i was kinda angry and in a sinister mood when I wrote, lol xxLove Is Brutal
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-03-04
cries That was so sad....but brilliant at the same time!! i'm adding it to my favourites because, as much as i don't like to admit to it, i LOVE readig fics where they die slaps head Yes i know i'm sick...but there's something so beautful about it-lol :)Love Is Brutal
(#) ThePatient 2007-03-16
OMG! That was so sad! I love reading and writing Deathfics. Yes i am disturbed. That was brilliant! I am in awe of you! Well done!Love Is Brutal
(#) darkdreams 2007-05-16
Oh my god. Why didn't you ever say you were so good at writing these sort of things. Even though it's slightly disturbing its very very good though it did take me a couple of reads to realize who was killign themselves. Well brilliant.Love Is Brutal
(#) I_am_a_Graveyard 2011-08-22
I love how you wrote, almost makes up for the sadness. Very well done -claps-. I love witing these sort of stories.
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