Next. You learn a bit more about Toni in this one.
hey! just wanted to say i really like your story. looking forward to see what happens in the next chapter!
woo! i just read all this nit's brilliant!!!!!! :):):)
damn great story kep writing
i like it, especially that last part it was amusing as hell keep on going
More characters... It's great how you give just enough to describe them to let us know their personalities. And a clif-hanger ending! Well, I'm glad I'm reading this all the way through right now or else I'd be driven crazy! this chapter deserves a point!
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