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8 ReviewsNext. You learn a bit more about Toni in this one.
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(#) violent_kiss 2007-02-02 02:55:34 PM
hey! just wanted to say i really like your story. looking forward to see what happens in the next chapter! -
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(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-02 03:17:12 PM
woo! i just read all this nit's brilliant!!!!!! :):):) -
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(#) Crimsonsorrow 2007-02-03 08:15:25 PM
i like it, especially that last part it was amusing as hell keep on going -
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(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-06 10:05:57 AM
More characters... It's great how you give just enough to describe them to let us know their personalities. And a clif-hanger ending! Well, I'm glad I'm reading this all the way through right now or else I'd be driven crazy! this chapter deserves a point! -
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(#) ... 2007-05-02 01:21:59 PM
It's a good story, but I'm a little confused...you said that Joey ONLY told Toni that he was gay, yet those kids kept calling him 'fag'...Author's response
Yer well. I kinda slipped up there. But let's just say It's a common insult from this guy. And... he has only TOLD toni, but other kinda guess coz he doesn't take interest in girls and he hang out with one. I was trying to make this McKenzie guy as shallow as shower.
Hope that cleared stuff up a bit for ya. And thanks for picking up on it.!
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(#) ... 2007-05-02 01:22:37 PM
It's a good story, but I'm a little confused...you said that Joey ONLY told Toni that he was gay, yet those kids kept calling him 'fag'...