lamenting from all parties...
aww, poor patrick. im so sad for him.
noo!! its like timing is everything. yah know? if some of this stuff happened just minutes later or before, everything would be different. im goin crazy here!! its ana mazing story thouhg.
this story makes my heart hurt.
i love love love it.
well not th heart hurting part, but you know.
I love the cross over of dialogue, it's intense, it's giving us a 3D view of this story and you're very clever missy.
I'm enjoying this way too much. I'm a big fab but you know that already.
Wonderful job, here...I'll read the next chapter when I can focus on the more wonderful things in life. Keep it up
Aww. I think she should come back.
Love it, update soon.
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