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3 ReviewsWIP AU Harry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to le...
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Flames of Betrayal
(#) Jalahi 2005-09-01 08:51:21 AM
Ah-the plot sickens! VERY original twist at the end of the chapter. The question though, is how was Voldemort able to use the "bone of the Father" from Tom Sr.'s grave during the rebirth ceremony? Im guessing it was because he BELIVED Tom Sr was his father, but I'm curious to see your reasoning behind it.
To nitpick, however, the rest of this chapter felt, well, like filler almost. I think two scenes of James' life was a little redundant-you probably could've used the scene of James getting his letter, and still have made your "Harry regrets not having parents" point quite nicely. They were still quite enjoyable to read, and very well written, don't get me wrong, it was just a simple nitpick
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Flames of Betrayal
(#) Ishtar 2005-09-03 08:04:07 PM
Given that Tom Riddle was already in his teens at the time Dumbledore killed Grindelwald, Dumbledore's plans must have started well before the rise of Grindelwald - is it possible he had a part in the creation of Grindelwald as well, so as to be seen as the vanquisher of multiple Dark Lords? Given that his insanity seems to reach well back into his youth, I wouldn't be at all surprised. He is perhaps the ultimate in sociopaths, formulating plans that will take decades to work out. -
Flames of Betrayal
(#) riegert8 2005-09-04 05:21:03 PM
I like how story is going. I would not mind to see hermione to be forgiven. But I think that she would earn the trust and friendship. And don't matter what happen, it always takes longer to earn trust. When you have lost it