With the support of her friends and Gerard, Monica must face her past.
WOWZER!!! i love it love it love it! cant wait for more
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-04 03:22:39 PM
Oh wow, that was seriously amazing! I was wondering how you were going to pull this entire thing together and you did it so well! I can't wait until the next chapter tomorrow. Be rated!!!
(#) sleepmylove 2007-02-04 03:39:39 PM
That was sooo good. I can't wait for the rest of Monica's story. I am glad Monica has bonded with Ray...he cares but he is not directly involved so he is able to remain level headed.
Can't wait until tomorrow!
(#) sweetrevenge77 2007-02-04 03:52:28 PM
og...my...gosh...this was so good...i cant wait to find out how Gee will react...This is my favorite story on this page...everytime i see another chapter is posted i get all excited!!!
Sure you didn't mean to. AM I SO MEAN? WHY LEAVE ME LIKE THAT?! lol oh well; i can't wait for tommarow then :)
(#) natz 2007-02-04 05:02:41 PM
at least i got to know something
i was actually trembling as i read
i thought Monica had actually punched him senseless or something
i think i'm gonna end up having a nightmare about this
love the new chapter!!!MORE!
It's so nice to learn more about her husbands death! Can't wait for tomorrow!!
(#) blitzy 2007-02-04 08:14:55 PM
wow, i thought sure she pushed him into the pond or maybe that he fell in and she refused to help him out or something. And you know, i wouldnt have blamed her one bit.
okay, you! don't write this kind of stuff when one has been listening to 'three cheers' all evening! my eyes are tearing and i can't even read the rest until tomorrow! GRRrr! puppy dog eyes can we at least get it early tomorrow??? pweeeease???!!!