Harry's meeting with King Ragnok has a lot of consequences, for Harry as well as the goblins.
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-01-07 11:22:54 PMGreat story.
A few things I did not see so far:
When is Harry going to do blood ritual to become Sirius Black son?
Is there going to be will readings, if so what will Harry get?
I thought Harry was Gryffindor's hire as well.
Please update soon?
- Well, this if the first time I have read these two chapters and I have to say that I really liked them. It's too bad you decided to abandon it. I think, if you cleaned up the grammar a little and maybe made Harry less talkative (like telling the teachers all he told them and what not, its a little too trusting for someone who has decided he no longer wants to be on the same sides with) and this story could be really good. I really liked the whole Goblin nation allegiance and Harry giving them an island in return, the idea was well done. I am sad to know you are not continuing it.
(#) Anaknisatanas 2008-01-21 12:40:39 AMI want to know what Flitwick was talking about! I do hope we can expect another update quicker than this last time. I like the idea of Harry with the Slytherins, Tracey and Daphne. Will we get to see any of the training Harry does over summer, or his talks with Daphne and Tracey's parents?
(#) Anaknisatanas 2008-01-21 12:40:44 AMI want to know what Flitwick was talking about! I do hope we can expect another update quicker than this last time. I like the idea of Harry with the Slytherins, Tracey and Daphne. Will we get to see any of the training Harry does over summer, or his talks with Daphne and Tracey's parents?
- Oh god, please tell me you are willing to update this! I haven't been able to read nonstop like that in ages! A bit nitpicking, whats with authors writing about katanas and Harry?
Author's responseI don't "The Chieftain" is ever going to get finished. I once had someone asking whether they could continue the story and I gave them my permission, but I haven't heard from him/her since.
Looking back, I don't know whether I should have published these two chapters, but hey...
As for the katana comment, there are a lot of fics where Harry suddenly becomes proficient with that Japanese sword, which I find a bit ridiculous - a British wizard using a sword from the other side of the world? Highly unlikely.