(#) KorinDragoon 2016-08-04If you still need a beta reader I'm good at bouncing ideas around and would be willing to help. You can reach me @ firstname.lastname@example.org.
Lovin the story so far things seemed to move a little bit too quick but you did it in a way that worked I've seen many stories where the author tried to rush it and failed.
Do please continue to write this story.
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