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Aquarium Steps

You may not realise that she's known all along. In sleep, in dreams, Misa understands better than anyone. (L/Raito and heavy doses of Misa's unrequited love)

Category: Death Note - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: L, Misa, Yagami Raito - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/02/07 - Updated: 2007/02/07 - 1236 words - Complete

Reviews

• Aquarium Steps

  (#) Taes 2007-02-17 11:22:10 AM

  ...that was profound...
  
  I liked the lead, loved the middle, and wanted more at the end. XD ; what more can be said?
  
  Eloquent words and beautiful images...I love the way you phrased it. :) Great job.

• Aquarium Steps

  (#) miriya 2007-02-19 07:05:16 AM

  Good god, you amaze me with your writing. Hee, I adored Trivium all across the internets, and this is a delightful addition. You slipped a few times (I think it was accidental; perhaps not) between past and present tense in a few places, but your imagery and use of language is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic. Also, your Misa is so aching and beautiful, just-augh. Wow. ___
  
  Plz to be writing more?

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