this is my second attempt at a one-shot, its a little lengthy; i dont seem to be that great at them, but i guess it was worth trying. *reviews are rad!
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-02-24 01:31:05 PMEach word had blew me away with it's sincere emotion. I loved this. It was heart-wrenching to the core and I don't think you could've written it any better, because this defines perfection.
You say that you don't seem to be that great at them. Hell, your amazing at one-shots!
It makes me want to cry, and that's what I love about it. It's as though you can actually feel Allie's pain and love she had for Pete. Or you could feel the jealousy she had for her twin, wanting to have her life and to have Pete.
Incredible. Incredible. Incredible.
Rating and favoritng. =D