FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy

The Pros and Cons Of Breathing

this is my second attempt at a one-shot, its a little lengthy; i dont seem to be that great at them, but i guess it was worth trying. *reviews are rad!

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2007/02/07 - Updated: 2007/02/08 - 1721 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Pros and Cons Of Breathing

  (#) sing4me09 2007-02-08 04:08:52 PM

  awww....
  
  sad :[

• The Pros and Cons Of Breathing

  (#) xharlequingirl 2007-04-30 06:31:13 PM

  Very good. Don't say you aren't good at these. I've enjoyed both of them so far!

• The Pros and Cons Of Breathing

  (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-02-24 01:31:05 PM

  Each word had blew me away with it's sincere emotion. I loved this. It was heart-wrenching to the core and I don't think you could've written it any better, because this defines perfection.
  
  You say that you don't seem to be that great at them. Hell, your amazing at one-shots!
  
  It makes me want to cry, and that's what I love about it. It's as though you can actually feel Allie's pain and love she had for Pete. Or you could feel the jealousy she had for her twin, wanting to have her life and to have Pete.
  
  Incredible. Incredible. Incredible.
  
  Rating and favoritng. =D

Filter