Bellatrix is having a VERY bad day, Harry is greeted by the Dawn.
- I just found this story and read through the whole thing so far. I have to say this is one of my favorite stories. I hope Harry ends up with both Bella and Marie. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
Author's responseThank you for reading and taking time to review, and for your kind remarks. I'm having a good time writing this story and that's usually a good sign.
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-02-15 01:20:48 PMI am really enjoying reading this fic, and from how fast you update I see you are enjoying writing this too. I've only just now saw your replies to my previous reviews. Thank you for answering my questions. Did you submit this story to fanfiction.net yet? I searched for your story there and I did not find it.
After reading this chapter I thought about Bella's torture. Isn't it very stupid of Voldemort and Draco to put her through that? If the mother looses too much blood can't that be detrimental to the child. Pregnant women ARE known to be very fragile for a reason after all.
I like how you brought back Dawn for even this small part. I felt very bad for her when I read her story. At least now we know how she is doing.
Well, that's all I have for now. I'll leave another review in the next chapter.
Author's responseThank you for reading and your in-depth response. At this point in her pregnancy shock and the subsequent release of adrenalin are very dangerous to the fetus, that's one of the reason's Dawn is so important to the story. Her intervention prevented a miscarriage. I hope to bring up that point in a later chapter. (Does that qualify as a spoiler?)
I have just recently begun posting on Fanfiction.net as well. Family Issue is rated "M." And if the mods at RestrictedSection.org pick up the story there will be a more explicit version there.