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Chapter 3

Chapter 3

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/02/14 - Updated: 2007/02/15 - 776 words

Reviews

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) Alison 2007-02-14 07:40:35 PM

  ahhhh! I totally love this story! i wonder whats up with derrik? hmmmm keep going! totally great!

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) cutandbleed 2007-02-14 09:36:17 PM

  i really like this story
  mysterious
  lol
  update soon?

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) ThePatient 2007-02-15 08:24:13 AM

  I've got to say i prefered the other two chapters although the ending was really good but i dont think the beginning was particularly as good as you others! It was still a excellant chapter though and please carry on!

  Author's response

  Yeah, I'd have to say I agree with you! This was a tough one. I'm going to start working on the next chapter very soon =)

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) haleyxhomicide 2007-02-15 06:59:40 PM

  Poor Derrick!! What happend to hiM!
  and why the fuck dosn't she have a bed?

  Author's response

  You make me giggle :P
  She has a bed, she just fell asleep on the futon. I guess I should have thrown that in there. Heheh.

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) AlexSanDee 2007-02-16 10:09:19 PM

  Short chapter but that's OK. You are building your story.

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