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Twenty Seven

by marietsy 4 Reviews

WIP AU Harry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to le...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Humor - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2005/09/06 - Updated: 2005/09/06 - 5842 words

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  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) Jalahi 2005-09-06 03:31:38 PM

    I really want to know what's under Remus' super memory charm. I'd wager it's something equivilant (sp?) to the DD is Voldemort's father revelation. And does DD know that someone is tampering with Remus' memory charm?

    I am happy to see the Fawkes question resolved, and I like the way it was done as well. I am curious though, if Ron would be able to bond with/need a familiar as well. He does share Harry's magic now, as I understood the blood brother ritual, so I would wager he would be powerful enough to be able to bind with a familiar.

    Probably one of my favorite chapters to date so far.
  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) Badger-dude 2005-09-18 01:59:03 PM

    Nice story. ver origional idea for Ron but the Dumbledore-is-evil is a bit old but i like your twist on it. Your story is the first I have read on here but i have an account under the same name on FF.net. Like the eppy referance by the way. Oh and what happened to the photos Percy was going to sent to the prohet.
    Anyway enough from me. Update sooooooooooonnnnnnnn
  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) jammies2000 2006-04-15 11:15:49 PM

    Hey I was reading this story over at another site and I know you made some changes but it seems like something is missing between this chapter and the next one. It skips the whole reason why Dobby needs to get the blood from the headmaster and also the bonding with Fawkes unless you decided to take that out. But it just seems weird to have Snape leaving the room to check on Harry and then the very next chapter starts talking about Dobby getting blood from Albus. It doesn't even tell us what is wrong with Harry. Anyway this is a great story and I like Lack of Faith too. Thx for posting keep writing.
  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) DrT 2008-07-26 03:56:39 PM

    Excellent ideas on Remus

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