Charlie and Patrick finish up their first date.
(#) luckysgc921 2007-02-16 11:31:59 PMwow..
a) cute as hell.
b) cute as hell-er. (the whole Oh. My. God. my assumption about drug dealer was way off)
c) fucking creepified poster. that shit would NOT be on my walls. shudder
i love you.
Author's responseI do it all for you, love :P Now go post a pretty update for me.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-16 11:45:58 PMMy browser broke when i put in your suggested link, then again, I do have blocks on all indecent material.....
Kyle, this was awesome, I love the kid. He's brutal.
Just need some more. Like. Now.
Author's responseOh Katy, it's not that indecent. I promise...
There will be updatage. Like. Soon.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-17 01:52:45 AMI absolutely adore Jeremy. Seriously. His "I. Want. To. Meet. Him." was priceless, especially in that tone of voice. Yikes.
I think I'm going to have to check this poster out... bear suit? Riiiight.
Anyway, points to you because this chapter was amazing and I love your writing. :)
Author's responseI'm trying to make Jeremy sound like a typical 13 year old, but it's been so long since I was that age. So glad you like him. And yes, do check out the poster. Andy's face is the best. And if I'm not mistaken, Joe is a skunk...or that's what he looks like to me.
(#) JokeMeKisses 2007-02-17 11:45:40 AMOne point for you : ) This story is definitely original! I love it! Jeremy is absolutely hilarious. And Patrick, is just so...Patrick. lol. Keep up the great work!
Author's responseYay! Thank you very much. I really wanted to write something different, I'm just glad it hasn't blown up in my face...yet. :)
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-19 10:01:55 AMAt first I was slightly confused. Then I realized that this was not "Addict for Dramatics"... Can you believe I pay even less attention to story titles when I read stuff for school?
I loved this chapter. Especially the way Charlie found out who Patrick is (more or less). I wonder if her son "must" love him now or hate him even more...
Author's responseHaha. Only you, Alex. She's still not sure who Patrick is, but he's got to be a big deal if he's on a poster wearing a bear suit. And I'm not sure if Jeremy will love Patrick or hate him. I'm leaning toward hate. Lots and lots of hate.
- You know...I'm trying to think of how I would react if I saw my date on a poster wearing a bear costume. I don't think it would be a good reaction and coming from hickville, USA, it probably wouldn't be as cute as Patrick in a bear costume....shrugs