Bellatrix receives a sad visitor, things are falling into place for Harry's platoon
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-17 05:57:02 PMOK, it's time for an update and I do hope that you take my criticism constructively and that it does not take you away from your story. They story, in and of itself, is interesting and I hope that you continue to working on it.
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-02-18 02:29:22 PMThis feels like a transitional chapter, where nothing really big happens but it moves the story along anyway. I'm not saying it is bad, just that I feel as if nothing of importance happened here. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's responseThank you for reading and responding. Yep, right in one, this is a transitional chapter, but later in the story you'll see why this one was needed. packs up ladder, picks up paint can and ladder and walks offstage