A one-shot. You have read all the clichés. You know you might even write them, intentionally or otherwise. And yet, where are the lines that failed to become cliché? Right here, of course. A...
(#) Alorkin 2007-02-20 03:23:18 PM
I have to say; This was as understandable as the wreckage from a train collision, convoluted like a faceless jigsaw puzzle, as titillating as the newest adult feature at the Bijou, funny like the comics on SNL, and as silly as all get-out!
A very good job, sez I. Alorkin
(#) hoser41 2007-02-20 04:48:04 PM
Wow, I think that that fic had every bad (are there good ones?) cliche's in it. One of my personal favorites most authors use is the excuse of letting Ron eat all the food in the world, because he's a growing boy. This one was pretty funny though.
(#) dudemas 2007-02-20 05:05:03 PM
Wow. This was a fun poke at all that bad stories out there. I don't think I understood some of the references, but I like how you made fun of all those cheesy authors.
(#) comp_wiz101 2007-02-20 05:39:57 PM
That was excellent! Good show including the sock stealing... it has been quite a while since I've seen such a good reference.
I liked it, and yes you got most of the cliches down pat. Gotta love predictable fanfiction....or not.
Thanks for writing,
(#) shadewalker 2007-02-20 11:23:52 PM
this story encompasses the phrase "What the F*?!" completely and totally. You also achieved this elusive goal while maintaining excellent grammar and spelling. Congrats on a great job. Now... WTF?!