Harry begins to understand Bellatrix, his new friends begin to understand him
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-02-21 10:35:29 AMWow, I'm the first person to review this chapter. Neat. Okay, I just want to say that it is good that the story is good so far. I am wondering though just how anyone can get Bellatrix out of there in one piece. If she is at the lowest level then that means Voldemort is at the top. Anyway, I'm glad to know the sex of the baby. I've made a few decisions by flipping a coin myself. So will the next chapter be about getting Bellatrix out of there? Also, should I leave my reviews for the chapter here or on ff.net?
Author's responseThank you for Reading and Reviewing, it really helps. Have no fear, Harry is going to come for Bella, it may take a few chapters but it'll happen. I am publishing this story on FicWad as well as FF.net, what can I say, I'm an attention whore. I'm keeping the sex just shy of explicit so that I can publish on the non-NC17 sites. However, if you were to look at RestrictedSection.org, you might find a racier version.
I appreciate reviews so where ever you prefer if fine by me.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-21 06:49:55 PMGood chapter. Still a little short for my taste, however you were deliberately abrupt with the Bella/Harry conversation which suited the scene. I hope that you have an update shortly. I'm enjoying this story immensely.
Author's responseThanks, as always, for reading and taking the time to review. My chapters tend to be a bit short, but I like to update every three to four days, I can combine chapters and publish less often but I think most readers prefer more frequent updates; or rather I do. I'm glad you're enjoying the story; I should have another update tomorrow or Saturday.
(#) darthme1011 2007-02-21 07:23:42 PMmake it a bella/harry/magret
Author's responseThank you for reading and reviewing. Funny thing, Marietta wasn't even in my original outline, she just kinda wormed her way into the plot and now I find her indispensable; go figure! At this point I’m leaning toward a poly-amorous relationship. Think of it as a Harry sandwich (sounds bad when you say it, doesn’t it?)
- Great story so far.
I hope Harry will soon be able to rescue Belatrix and his unborn daughter -- and that he'll be able to put in a good word for her (Bella)... at least so she won't get the kiss and will be allowed visits from her daughter as she grows-up (and yes, I hope for a sequal focusing on the daughter... maybe attending Hogwarts).
Ideally I'd like Harry, Marie and Bella in some sort of relationship (some sort of marriage?), but I guess Bella may have quite a few years left in Azkaban on general principle.
I would also love Harry and his squad going on some mission.
I'd love a little bit about Harry's other friends (Ron, Hermione, ...) -- their reaction to Harry in a relationship with "the Sneak" while expecting a baby with a DeathEater, should be interesting.
Keep up the good work,
Author's responseThank you for reading and for a very thorough review. You seem to have access to my storyline notes, some of the fun will happen as Harry reunites with his Hogwarts friends and endures or enjoys their various reactions. Think the magical world's equivalent of "Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?"
- Puir puir Alex (unless his sympathy was designed to draw Bella out?)
Author's responseThank you for reading and reviewing, I'm afraid 'poor poor Alex' is right, he is a victim here. I have to say this, you are my favorite Fanfic author, I always know it's going to be a good day for reading when I spy a DrT update.
(#) AmberDragonfly 2007-04-04 05:15:31 AMWow, finally a fanfic written by a grownup. I love your use of the 'subconcious' voices, and the look into the character's psyche.
Professor of Literature, perhaps?
Author's responseThank you for reading and taking the time to review, and your kind comments. I have taught English Composition at my little College in North Florida, but my specialty is something else.