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Florin's Defence

by fruit_addict 2 Reviews

Florin is under attack and this time it is Westley's responsibility. I edited out the movie quotes and cleaned up the writing a bit. Still a work in progress.

Category: Princess Bride - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007/02/25 - Updated: 2012/08/05 - 440 words

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  • Florin's Defence

    (#) random_c 2008-12-29 02:39:02 AM

    It's spelt "Florin"

    Author's response

    For goodness' sake it is. Thank you.
  • Florin's Defence

    (#) stargate-lover 2011-08-20 08:37:10 PM

    I like the bigining so far but i would start getting away from quoting the movie. If your going to contiue the story :)

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