O.W.L. results and things with Ron deteriorate
- Great story so far, keep it up.
How much does Ginny and Hermione knows about Ron's (and Percy's) betrayal? Ginny obviously knows about the lust-potion -- and perhaps the plan for them to get married and then killed, so the family could get the money... but what about the pure-blood agenda -- especially keeping a few mudbloods as whores? How much does Hermione known (I would guess that if she knew Ron wanted her as a whore, she would've punched him and leave the Burrow)?
I love Harry/Ginny as a couple, but do I also detect a possibility of combining it with Harry/Hermione (whom I also love) in your story? That would be great... and they are staying together (and when Hermione learns the truth about Ron).
Speaking of relationships, Tonks...?
Keep up the great work, and update soon.
- A nother well-done chapter. Your explanation of Ron's behavior is plausable. I used something like that (The 'brain attack' that is) in two of my own tales. it's like a radio wave feedback loop. It gets stronger with each cycle. Soon enough it's going t come to a head. Ron has shown his willingness to attack Harry, and that's going to get woree as well. I hope Harry realizes/discovers the reason, and finds some way to counter the poison now infecting his best friend.
As always, I eagerly await the next page oof 'Best Served Cold' Alorkin
(#) jabarber69 2007-02-26 03:30:39 AMHey love your story and as usual it is extremely well written but got a question: The Twins have documented evidence of Ron's and Percy bigoted views and betrayals of Harry. Now its a given that they are family but Harry is also family in there views and especially since he is also a silent partner and money backer so why are they holding back with the evidence?
- What a great chapter;
Ron jealousey is just getting him into trouble, why can't he see that Harry doesn't want the money or the fame, all he wants is a loving family.
So it looks like that the second latter that Ron got, made him more jealous then he was meant to be. Was Percy or someone else that sent him the second latter and the other latters?
"But Malfoy's gay, he's in a threesome with Crabbe and Goyle." Now that is going to give me nightmares now, thanks a lot. :P
Good, Harry is going to try and become a bright student, he once was.
The jealous git Ron, sighs he is forcing Harry leave the Borrow.
- I'm going to step beyond my earlier comment after further consideration and opinion that Percy definitely is a Death Wanker, that the letters were delivered by Wormtail, and that it's all a plot of Voldie's to weaken Potter. All things considered, it's more likely to end up strengthening Harry in the long run; strengthening him tremendously if some of the fallout ends up binding Hermione with both him and Ginny, the resulting combination of talent and ability would be rather scary to comtemplate having against you.