When Jack arrives in Tortuga after many hardships and disasters he finds the most unlikely comrade but will he be able to resist the temptation that she brings? And what scerts is the mysterious wo...
(#) MandelisChaos 2007-04-15 03:28:03 PMI really do think that this story has potential, but it really should be put into the Pirates of the Caribean section and not the Romance section. If there is no section for Pirates of the Caribean then you can always request it. I hope that your story becomes sucessful. Oh, and make sure that you use your paragraphing correctly. I hope to see you soon.
(#) GinnyPotter 2007-08-28 06:45:07 PMI agree with MandelisChaos. Your story is really good, but if anything, I would like you to spell check your work, please. A little more than once I'd see a misspelled word in there, or a letter missing from a word. But, other than that, good work!