This is one battle he knows he'll never win... (SasukexSakura) My first short!
- Very moving and an excellent drabble.
It was a little confusing on who was holding whom where, but not enough to truly distract from the story.
Does he live, does he die? What happens next? Good questions, but probably best that there are no answers. Story is better that way.
As for the next one... I vote FF7, but that is mainly because I have extremely limited knowledge of the other. But let your muse take you!
Author's responseI was trying to convey a certain disorientation on Sasuke's part, so I let the details of their arms go a little fuzzy. In the story Sasuke and Naruto have just come out of battle (what battle is up to the reader's imagination), so he's kind of out of it. But maybe I could have made the existance of that disorientation a little clearer?
- A technical drabble is one hundred words exactly, though most things that people call drabbles won't stick to that. Under a thousand is called a 'short short', under five hundred is 'flash fiction'. :3
Author's responseI see! Thanks for the info. I'll make the changes so that people don't get mixed up about what exactly it is. I guess I added an extre zero to a drabble's count! XD
- Awww, so sweet! You should do a NaruHina one, but I'm not forcing you. :)
Author's responseActually I was kind of thinking of it. They're my favorite Naruto pairing (couldn't you tell from the last story?) and I thik it's time for a little war-&-fuzzy for them. But that won't be for a little while yet. My literary plate is full at the moment. ;)