(#) superhyoga 2007-02-28The story is very good. The chapters is very short, You tries to make them longer. Update soon.
Author's responseThank you for the advise, I will try and make them a bit longer. Riht now, my goal for each chapter is at least 2000 words. As it is, I have already written out up to seven chapters for this story.
(#) jabarber69 2007-02-28I agree with the last reviewer, good story but you need longer chapters.
Author's responseHey, you look familiar! :) Your on this site too? Well, I do have the other chapters ready to post, I'm just waiting for a few more reviews. You know how I like to keep everyone one their toes. Chapter eight will probably be the start of longer chapters once I get my muse to come up with a decent idea.
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