Falling in love was quite annoying. (Alfeegi/Ruwalk)
(#) misura 2007-03-01 12:24:30 AMThis story was so much love! You write Alfeegi's voice (in third pov) superbly, and his interactions and relationships with the other occupants of the Castle were portrayed wondrously in this piece. I loved the detail of the romance-novel, too, and of Cernozura getting some much-deserved screen-time (she seems to show up so rarely in fics). A great read!
(#) animegoil 2007-03-01 07:31:26 PMOMG, absolute spaz That was incredible. It was a hilarious way of making Alfeegi fall in love with him, describing it as a disease. I wanted to laugh sooo hard. I can't believe he was looking in TEXTBOOKS, my god, Alfeegi's such a dork XD
But it was sooo cute (and hot) and I loved the stream-of-consciousness technique, it workeed very well. I particularly enjoyed CErnozura and Kaistern's involvement in this. And your descriptions/similes/metaphors. ^_^ Wonderful, original, amusing piece!