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The Realm of the Veil

by IrishClover 6 Reviews

A visit to a new realm and the meeting of an old friend.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy - Characters: Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Ron, Sirius, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/03/01 - Updated: 2007/03/01 - 5330 words

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  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) Cateagle 2007-03-01 08:48:37 PM

    snicker It should be -real- interesting when Ginny returns from her walk, esp. if Harry and Sirius are with her. That should be a "riot scene" of epic proportions. Good story, here, with a unique premise.
  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) s_maiyur 2007-03-03 07:58:18 PM

    Your story is planned, but too detailed. I would suggest that you would cut down on that, as it will render the story more readable, without taking off the interest of the reader with too much details. Otherwise, the story is great and inviting.
  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) Pinkpixxy 2007-03-04 02:37:05 PM

    your story is great the way it is and i like the second version of chapter six. keep up the good work i look forward to reading more chapters. :)
  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) madengineer 2007-03-07 05:36:11 AM

    hhm the part which you kept finally is the better part.

    BTW read ur 6 chaps at once. Not bad, standard stuff....the story really begins now.
  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) LeprechaunJV 2008-03-10 11:22:16 AM

    Interesting. Hope to see further updates until completion.
  • Of Sorcerers and Wizards

    (#) moonlight428 2008-06-08 10:22:12 AM

    Hello! :-)

    It's a really good story! Keep writing! :-D

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