A visit to a new realm and the meeting of an old friend.
snicker It should be -real- interesting when Ginny returns from her walk, esp. if Harry and Sirius are with her. That should be a "riot scene" of epic proportions. Good story, here, with a unique premise.
Your story is planned, but too detailed. I would suggest that you would cut down on that, as it will render the story more readable, without taking off the interest of the reader with too much details. Otherwise, the story is great and inviting.
your story is great the way it is and i like the second version of chapter six. keep up the good work i look forward to reading more chapters. :)
hhm the part which you kept finally is the better part.
BTW read ur 6 chaps at once. Not bad, standard stuff....the story really begins now.
Interesting. Hope to see further updates until completion.
It's a really good story! Keep writing! :-D
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