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• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) cnharp 2007-03-06

  dude, intenseness!!! i just love making up words!!! LOL!! anyways, i really liked this chapter. i can't believe pete did that though. I hope eerything works out, can't wait for more! XO-Cassi LOL!!!!!

  Author's response

  making up words is the best thing ever. thanks for reviewing!
  lol.
  XO.
  - Alex

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-06

  I'm tellin' you right now that our love fern is blossoming. I so love you right now. The note exchange between her and Patrick was too funny. "Save the planet." teehee But seriously, if any woman got to do a duet with Patrick, I'd be so SO jealous. It'd probably be THE best love song EVER. Just 'cuz. :)
  Oh, back to the story...and the fact that she doesn't know Patrick wrote the other part of the lyrics makes it even better. Oh Peter...

  Author's response

  OMG YAY FOR OUR LOVE FERN!
  your reviews are amazing as always.
  love youuuuu.
  xxxo.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-06

  silly pete and his schemes. cant wait for more, as always .. sheesh i should start thinking of better things to comment.

  Author's response

  nah i love your reviews silly. lol.
  xxxxo.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-07

  Sooo, I really don't need to review anymore. I think I've said everyhitng that needs to be said in the whole history of ficwad praise. But I am clearly impressed! The note bit had be smiling like none other. I was all like 'haha, take that Patrick and your stupid pollow note'. They're both being completely childish, but at least it's entertaining. lol
  
  And Pete... god love him. I think that was sooo romantic how they didn't even know the other one wrote the part they sang. But surely they'll find out soon? Or probably not, knowing you, they're going on tour after all.
  
  Well, I found it utterly 'exciting' and I eagerly await your next chapter because... well, I'm like that... eagerly awaiting and all. You truly have stolen my heart, my dear! :)
  
  /XO
  Gwendolyn/

  Author's response

  AHHHH, i love your reviews to the max times infinity forever and ever, lol. yes it's that draztic/dramatic.
  i also love you too to the max times infinity forever and ever.
  :)
  haha.
  
  xxxxxo

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-07

  I really enjoyed the story. Can't wait for more.

  Author's response

  thank you, i'm glad!:)
  xxxo

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-03-17

  /Joe sighed while attempting to braid her hair.
  / I sighed too.
  
  You know, you're great. Gwennie's better with the actual reviews, my reviews are more of like, a reaction?
  
  Yeah

  Author's response

  i like your reactions. they make me happy inside.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) ssketchator 2007-05-29

  I enjoyed the braiding attempt, and Joe innocently dropping her hair. Cute cute cute.

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