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Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Dragen 2007-03-09
What another great chapter;
Oh good, Dudley is getting what he should at the beginning.
Why did the Dursley's get away with everything if they were as bad as it seems?? I know they still are getting away with a few things...
There was no way Harry was going to stay for Vernon. But unluckly, Harry knock himself out. There is one thing no-one should do, and that is to make Harry mad... like the Dursley's are finding out.
Oh Dumbledore feels sorry for himself, as he should. Oh I love Mrs. Figg being able to talk to her cats.
I love that Harry can do Fire Balls, very nice.
At long last Fate finally caught up with the Dursleys and gave them what they so richly deserved.
I can't wait to see what happens next, I wonder what the ships are going to be??Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) madmaxs 2007-03-09
very good story keep up the good work i hope to see many more chaptersHarry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-03-09
This was a really excellent chapter, probably the best so far. I hope to see more soon, any idea how close we are to Harry going to Hogwarts?Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) autumn 2007-03-09
Another exelent chapter. Congratulations, and keep up the good work. Nice long lovely well written chapters. as reading through it i did not notice and spelling mistakes so again congratulations to you and your beta.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Cateagle 2007-03-09
Well, the Dursleys got what they deserved; I daresay that just leaving Harry alone would've saved them tons of trouble, but some folk are too stupid to learn. I did like the way Dumbledore got a comeuppance of sorts, too. Mayhaps this version will stop thinking of himself as 'all-knowing' and 'all-wise' and start solicting others' opinions and thoughts, too. We can hope this improves things.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Cateagle 2007-03-09
oh, regarding Diane Duane's "Feline Wizards" stories, they share a common background with her YA "Young Wizards" stories and are a cracking good read on their own. I'm sure you're not the only one to give each species a different language and you didn't use the name she gave the feline language, so I don't see any problems.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Nautilus 2007-03-09
i agree with you, the chapter was good. i liked what happened in the end with each character. most importantly i love the last line, How Dumbledore would do whatever it took to fix this... its still shows that he will be manipulative, but for his reasons of making sure harry forgives him. i guess kinda like over-protecting gone wrong really.
its dumbles own demons on his failures that will force (allow) him to be 'manipulative' where as he is just trying to make it up to harry. though i don't think that is how harry will see it in a few yrs time...
i like the fire ability, that should be interesting.. just please please please, don't go overboard with teh all abilities... anyway congrats and update soon.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Taure 2007-03-10
At first when I saw this story around the title made me avoid it...I thought it was a parody of all those Super!hHrry and Indy!Harry fics called "The Power of Time", or something to that effect.
Anyway, I'm glad I took a look in the end, because although it is indeed looking like Harry will be rather super-ish (I prefer a powerful-but-realistic Harry), I have enjoyed the story greatly.
Good chapter length, nice ideas and execution, and much promise of what is to come, I look forward greatly to your next chapter.
P.S. Is this on ff.net too? If so, what's the link?Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Shaggy37 2007-03-10
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Its about time the Dursleys got what was there due, is Harry still gonna end up going to Hogwarts? Will Harry still get the same wand he does in the books? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
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