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As the Tide Changes

by fire-rose 3 Reviews

My life story... Somewhat...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/03/11 - Updated: 2007/03/12 - 142 words - Complete

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  • As the Tide Changes

    (#) plainwhitetank 2007-10-18 06:00:04 AM

    that was sad and beautiful! i really liked it, my only criticism is that i thought there were a few too many metaphors/similes, but that's just in my opinion.
    ps. thanx for your review :)

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