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As the Tide Changes
3 ReviewsMy life story... Somewhat...
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As the Tide Changes
(#) plainwhitetank 2007-10-18 06:00:04 AM
that was sad and beautiful! i really liked it, my only criticism is that i thought there were a few too many metaphors/similes, but that's just in my opinion.
ps. thanx for your review :)