Categories > Original > Horror
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
4 ReviewsA group of teens go out to party over spring break but the fun soon turns to horror as something hunts them down one at a time.
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Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
(#) LadyLacrymosa 2005-11-18 10:07:40 PM
Hey, this is pretty good. But if I may make some observations? Perhapse a bit of dialouge a bit sooner in the story may help the reader get a better feel for the characters, also, check your spelling on a couple of places. But I do like this a lot, can't wait for more. Good job...
Life's a song, sing along.-Lady LacrymosaAuthor's response
Thanks for the input, I went back and made some changes so if you get the urge feel free to have a look and see what you think. I also encourage you to check out some of my other stories I have quite a few
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Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
(#) Togot 2005-11-19 01:48:01 AM
Thanks for the input, I went back and made some changes so if you get the urge feel free to have a look and see what you think, I also encourage you to check out some of my other stories I have quite a few -
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
(#) Tippsiwon 2007-11-04 07:00:48 AM
loved this one Sweetie it was soo cool ttyl -
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
(#) hellhound13 2012-02-18 03:52:12 PM
well this story certainly got my attention it was great i like how it was a werewolf