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Chapter 7: I'm Kind of a Big Deal

by MMMramen 14 Reviews

Charlie and Patrick go out to lunch. *Patrick's POV*

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2007/03/16 - Updated: 2007/03/16 - 1625 words


  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) whatkatydid 2007-03-16 10:51:40 AM

    ohhhhhh Mrs Whittaker! I freakin love you, this was just for me wasn't it?? lol

    I missed you!


    Author's response

    I totally wrote this for you. You know that. But don't tell the rest of the DoJ...xoxoxo
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) Frenchie189 2007-03-16 11:45:44 AM

    This story is great.

    I just took the time to read the whole thing.

    You've made me laugh so hard at some parts.

    I love it, update soon?

    Author's response

    Thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review. It means the world to me. Seriously. :) Glad you like it so far.
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) XTinkerbellX 2007-03-16 12:46:44 PM

    Aw...the ending was cute.
    I really love the way this story is going.

    Author's response

    I was aiming for cute, but there's a fine line between cute and creepy. Thanks for the review, daaaahling.
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) JokeMeKisses 2007-03-16 12:54:14 PM

    Jocelyn is absolutely adorable.

    Author's response

    :) I try. She just might get cuter.
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) lclutebark 2007-03-16 01:31:59 PM

    Aww 'It feels like carpet'
    Great chap!

    Author's response

    I cracked up in the middle of anatomy and physiology when I was typing this up. Now my classmates think I'm weird. It was totally worth it. :D
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-19 11:54:14 PM

    Yeah. Hi. I am still alive. Sorry for being late to this review party... :(

    You can't have my rating point because, obviously, this chapter's been stuffed with them already. And that doesn't surprise me. It's hilarious and cute and exciting.

    Patrick with a little kid. melts

    You are awesome.

    Author's response

    Alex? I was about to fly all the way to Austria just to make sure Bart didn't kill you or something. But now I have to cancel my flight. Loves you :)
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-21 05:22:30 PM

    I love this story. Can't wait for an update!! You are a great writer.

    Author's response

    Aw, thaaaank you. I try. Updates are underway...I swear.
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) riaryder 2007-03-23 08:43:50 AM

    How did I miss this update? I'm such a bad fan. Anyway...

    "You can't write this stuff." - Well apparently, yes YOU can. And very well.
    I love Patrick. I love the baby dilema. But most of all, I love Jocelyn. Oh, to be 3 again and stroke the Biscuit facial hair.......mmmmmmm
    Great update. The carpet thing made me laugh so hard, I just can't tell you.
    Yeah, you better not keep me waiting so long next time xxxxxxx

    Author's response

    Miss Rianna! It's about time, woman! Kidding, kidding. Since I can't stroke some Biscuity face hair, I have to live vicariously through a fictional 3 year old. Sad. Sad indeed. And as I always promise(but never live up to) there is an update in the works. :)
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) halleluiakid 2007-04-29 10:37:46 PM

    "It feels like carpet."


    loved it.

    Author's response

    Thank you, darling.
  • Rock The Cradle of Love

    (#) LOVELA 2007-05-09 11:00:50 PM

    I'm wondering how you write children so so so well?? Hmmmm? ponders
    Also, can you smell that drama that you've got cooking!? You are a madd chef with madd skillz.

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