Kara and Kelly have a bad morning and Gerard has a disturbing dream.
(#) Cerediwen 2007-03-16 03:43:47 PM
Ahhh...not good sighs Remind me never to listen to Paramore while reading this fic again (yes I listen to Paramore...and?) But I adored that chapter and I love the way you manage to keep track of all the different threads - seriously admire you for it.
I have to admit writing these chapters where Gee and Monica are apart have been hard. I have to remember the time difference, who knows what, ect. I'll be damn glad when Gee gets back to Jersey.
Gerard, Monica wouldn't do that to you!
Aw, Gee's afraid that Monica would leave him like Liv did, doesn't he? Poor Gee.
damn, poor kara. it probably sucks to realize awful things about your childhood that you were oblivious to back then. i hope monica and gerard get to be honest with one another. and, God! i hope jenn doesn't try to kill her or something! hence gerard's dream! :(
very good chapter!
hmm..wonderin wat gerard's dream cood mean...
anyway, update soon and
i hope that everything will be better...
omg nooo. lol i hope gee's dream doesnt come true. but great chapter anyway!
great chapter! can't wait for more!
(#) icyblue858 2007-03-16 11:57:19 PM
OMG I am on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for G to get home!
This was excellent!
(#) Reign_Madden 2007-03-17 11:26:07 AM
Poor Gee he's having anxiety dreams(i think that's right) That was a good chapter I hope Jenn doesn't get the girls she better stay away I own an AK47 and I know how to use it. More plz
(#) PencilPonce 2007-03-17 07:52:25 PM
You've done extremely well telling two stories at the same time (Jenn and Elena), plus you include Monica AND Gee in one chapter, which is really good!
I hope Gee's dream isn't one of those future thingies if you know what I mean =/