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After

by jeansvenus 10 Reviews

After the War, it seems that everyone is either a Healer or a patient. Harry spends time with an amnesiac Snape and a traumatized Draco.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Draco, Harry, Neville, Snape - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2007/03/17 - Updated: 2007/03/18 - 2774 words - Complete

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  • After

    (#) eiramss 2007-03-19 04:50:15 PM

    I think this is a really good story. It's disappointing that it's a one shot, but I guess its the sort of story that would be almost impossible to write well if it was longer, isn't it? I'm really looking forward to whatever you are planning on writing next, as both of your posted stories are really good.
  • After

    (#) foolishwandwaver 2007-03-19 11:58:14 PM

    Great story. Give me a couple things to think about, and to also wish there was more to answer all the questyions the story brought about.
  • After

    (#) sea0tter12 2007-04-08 08:00:37 PM

    It was an interesting premise for what amounted to an epilogue for all the characters. I did come away wishing for more depth, and I think a beta reader would be very helpful for many of the punctuation problems I saw. Overall, though, not bad.
  • After

    (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-05-27 12:30:58 PM

    Very well-written. But you have to write a sequel where the ban is lifted and they can live happily-ever-after

    Author's response

    Ý'm a page into the epilogue of that one-shot (so many people on HPFandom asked for one that Ý decided to write one when Ý could get around to it). Ýt will be finished and posted at some point, but with my other projects, Ý can't really say when.

    Thanks for the compliment!
  • After

    (#) laraq 2007-06-27 11:18:34 PM

    Such a wonderfully moving story. I really wish there was more.
  • After

    (#) banner 2008-01-14 12:08:58 PM

    It's been a long time since a story literally moved me to tears.
    Well done.
  • After

    (#) Cateagle 2008-05-06 10:35:34 PM

    -wince- That was quite a moving story and you managed to put a lot of background exposition into it without it sticking out like a sore thumb.

    Bravo!!
  • After

    (#) Clell65619 2008-05-07 08:48:48 AM

    - well done. Thank you.
  • After

    (#) LadyKnightKeladry 2009-01-08 07:35:46 PM

    This is just so good. It's really moving. Thank you.
  • After

    (#) Mistress_of_Potions 2011-09-08 08:16:59 PM

    Thank you so much. This is one of the most moving stories I have ever read.

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