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Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Shaggy37 2007-03-18
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I love how the Dursleys new life is, its the life they've always deserved for what they've done to Harry. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to Hagrid seeing as thats who I'm assuming is banging on the door to get into the hut that Harry is in. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) artdam 2007-03-18
You make nice long chapters, quite well written.
All in all its a good story, but something is off, and the problem is I can't put my finger on it. I don't know - maybe that it is slow paced, maybe to much Dursleys (why going back to show what happened to them - unless you'll bring them back in the future), and all that animal language thing - I personally don't like it, it makes his unique ability to talk to snakes a lot less than it should be.
Oh my, It sounds like a flame, but its not, really. I like the fic, I'm still reading it and waiting for the update.
So, update, mate.
ArtdamHarry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-03-18
Pretty good update. I'll be especially looking forward to seeing it finally cross into the realm of canon. One thing I'm hoping is that we won't see too much of the owl's language. Bits like that bother me a bit, but not too much.
Lastly, I'm not sure how far you intend to take this story...if it'll span all seven years or if there will be a sequel for second year, but I'm really hoping that it won't be Harry/Ginny.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Cateagle 2007-03-18
Ah, a very interesting chapter. I loved Dumbledore's nightmare and I hope it had some influence on him (fat chance, but one can but hope). It will be interesting to see how folks react to a Harry who, while by no means as ignorant as he is in canon, is not quite familiar with the modern (I use the word lightly) wizarding world.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-03-19
Another awesome chapter! Bravo. I love that dumbledore is getting his...Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Dragen 2007-03-19
What a great chapter, Harry let Dumbledore have it about leaving him at the Dursleys.
WoW... I love this bet 'Their surroundings also changed. Number Four, Privet Drive morphed into the dilapidated ruins of the Riddle House in Little Hangleton, and the bodies of the Dursleys also morphed into those of the Riddles, even though the Riddle House had been falling apart for decades, and the Riddles looked as though they could have just been killed within the past day.'
I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work and update soon.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Wonderbee31 2007-03-19
Heh, Dudley, at least at firs, sure seems to be unbalanced, maybe his time there will get him a sense of right and wrong back in the right order again. Interesting, and I do hope that Hedwig will be here, she's one of my favorite characters from the series.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) matthiasblack 2007-03-19
Well this is quite the fic you have here. I hope to read more from you as I am enjoying it immensely. I hope that you continue it on a regular basis and wish you luck in that task.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) jsdailey 2007-03-21
Great story, I predict the future integration of the AU and the rest of book one is going to be very interesting-I can't wait for an update.
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