Inuyasha, Kagome, Hojo and a serious boxer fetish.
Sounds entertaining, please continue.
Try to eliminate your passive voice and POV issues.
Eh, passive voice is underrated. I'd love to hear where the POV is giving you trouble, though.
...at least my stories aren't boring!!!
...tell me my spelling errors...
oh and i DID spell stentch right, dumbass!
who the hell taught u how to spell???
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