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Revenge Is a Dish Best Served Outside a Six-Mile Radius

by Ithilwen 4 Reviews

Inuyasha, Kagome, Hojo and a serious boxer fetish.

Category: Inuyasha - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Inuyasha, Kagome, Other - Published: 2006/10/23 - Updated: 2006/10/24 - 925 words - Complete

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  • Total Knockout

    (#) Rangerscout 2007-03-18 05:15:41 PM

    Sounds entertaining, please continue.
  • Total Knockout

    (#) Kourtesan 2007-12-30 03:08:56 PM

    Try to eliminate your passive voice and POV issues.

    ~ Kourtesan

    Author's response

    Eh, passive voice is underrated. I'd love to hear where the POV is giving you trouble, though.
  • Total Knockout

    (#) Inudork08 2008-02-24 07:20:38 PM

    ...at least my stories aren't boring!!!
    ...rude prick!
    ...tell me my spelling errors...
    i oughta...
    oh and i DID spell stentch right, dumbass!
    who the hell taught u how to spell???

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