Wow, this was...dizzying. As a rule I tend to be wary of second-person stories, because it's tricky to do them well, but you've done a damn good job with it here, and the voice is quirky and strange and compelling. Good stuff!
God,this has to be one of my very favorites. I can't believe how emotional it is despite the economy of words. I have read it at least 3 times,but it's deep and engaging.. Thank you for sharing it!!