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Belle gets a new identity and a new look, Mundungus Fletcher has a VERY bad day.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance - Characters: Bellatrix, Harry, Marietta Edgecombe, Other - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2007/03/20 - Updated: 2007/03/21 - 3063 words

Reviews

• Family Issue

  (#) Essedyss 2007-03-21 04:22:35 AM

  chuckles What they did to Dung was great. The bath scene was quite hot, too. Though I can't wait to see where the three are headed next. Anyways, keep up the good work! Update soon.

  Author's response

  Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Mundungus Fletcher is the HP version of Fabian in Oliver Twist, only without the orphans, or the inate charm. And those are his good points . . .

• Family Issue

  (#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-03-21 04:30:50 AM

  It was a nice surprise waking up to an email saying this fic has been updated. It was pretty cool the way they got Dung to confess where the locket is. However, I think the most impressive part is how Smith changed Bella's hair color. The guy WOULD be extremely rich if he ever opened a salon. Hell, I wish I had that power! I would never run out of customers as people from all over would come to me and I can charge whatever I want!
  
  I think I really like that every one of your chapters has a romantic or otherwise part for Harry, Marietta and Bella. It keeps it alive in my mind that way and makes the fic centered around them and their relationship while still being a combination of things like action/adventure.
  
  Hehe, I hate to say this but now Ginny has competition as the Hot-Redhead-That Turns-Harry-On. Damn, now I'm REALLY looking forward to when Harry, Marie and Bella meet up with Harry's friends and his ex-girlfriend (which I hope does not stay permanent). Oh, and when you told me someone else is being added to the mix but me REALLY anticipating who it could be. I'm trying to be patient but damn that is something to really look forward to!
  
  Oh yeah, YAY the 7th book is coming out exactly four months from now! Of course it is also DAMN the LAST book is coming out four months from now!

• Family Issue

  (#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-03-21 04:31:09 AM

  It was a nice surprise waking up to an email saying this fic has been updated. It was pretty cool the way they got Dung to confess where the locket is. However, I think the most impressive part is how Smith changed Bella's hair color. The guy WOULD be extremely rich if he ever opened a salon. Hell, I wish I had that power! I would never run out of customers as people from all over would come to me and I can charge whatever I want!
  
  I think I really like that every one of your chapters has a romantic or otherwise part for Harry, Marietta and Bella. It keeps it alive in my mind that way and makes the fic centered around them and their relationship while still being a combination of things like action/adventure.
  
  Hehe, I hate to say this but now Ginny has competition as the Hot-Redhead-That Turns-Harry-On. Damn, now I'm REALLY looking forward to when Harry, Marie and Bella meet up with Harry's friends and his ex-girlfriend (which I hope does not stay permanent). Oh, and when you told me someone else is being added to the mix but me REALLY anticipating who it could be. I'm trying to be patient but damn that is something to really look forward to!
  
  Oh yeah, YAY the 7th book is coming out exactly four months from now! Of course it is also DAMN the LAST book is coming out four months from now!

• Family Issue

  (#) flower123 2007-03-21 05:44:41 PM

  well they got the locket and they 'killed' bella. so ya they killed two birds with one stone. and now shes a red head.update soon

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and responding, yep, redhead. Can't help myself, I love redheads.

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-03-22 11:11:59 PM

  OK, read it, still too short for my tastes. If you're going to do NC17, do it with the cheesy circa 1970's porn music in the background. :) That said aside about the porn action, you've got an interesting chapter here. I'm just curious on if you can transcend into other subplots and lay them. You still need the other horcrux and you NEED to introduce the trio. It would definitely help the plot and thicken it up a bit. That's all I'll say on the subject.
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Hey, wasn't it GLuciano who suggested that I 'make use of the R rating?' Oh well. Good news, all the Horcurxes are accounted for in the next chapter, bad news; it's a cliffie.
  Laughs evilly
  N!

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