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Full Circle
10 ReviewsThe past catches up to us all. Eventually.
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(#) Triggerbox 2007-03-24 10:32:11 AM
This was pretty good. I have read Naruto is Yondaime before, but it wasn't very good. I look forward to your other works. -
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(#) darknessryu 2007-03-25 10:22:56 PM
i like it and interesting view on the naruto is yondaime. keep up the good work! -
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(#) dogbertcarroll 2007-03-30 07:32:11 AM
LOL!
Damn, but that was funny!
I'd really love to see the villagers reactions to that announcement! -
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(#) Skelethin 2007-04-27 07:25:11 PM
Aha!! I tracked you down yet again. I think I took a bit to come back here to find you, though.
Just as good as the first(second, third, nth) time I read it. Though you still missed a few spelling errors. Silly site hides the story from me while I review, so I can't just give them to you. Might email it later...
Anyway, very glad to see you are continuing to share your glorious works with those outside of TFF. Will be looking forward to more 'published' works. Until next time.
~Skelethin -
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(#) lord_phoenix 2007-05-06 05:35:19 AM
Great story m8!
I read the rest of your work in TFF and this is,as expected,as good as the rest!
I am greatly impressed by how original the stories are(except the name nagi appearing almost everywhere :P)despite their great number...and that is saying something in such an enormous fandom...
Please keep up the good work(no need to rush it though..genius takes time) -
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(#) Everyoneknows 2007-11-10 08:48:13 AM
Well done, especially for a Naruto Yondaime story. -
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(#) yojorocks 2007-11-29 07:24:12 PM
Beautiful and original, a superb story that left me wanting more but managed to satisfy my curiosity at the same time. Great job. -
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(#) serphied 2008-02-02 06:49:32 AM
A great story that left me wanting for more and the first good one shot I ever read oh and the 4th hokages name is Namikaze Minato not Kazama Arashi -
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(#) bucks-sw4 2008-06-15 10:05:41 AM
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Your story has made it in to the library of the forum. We are a site that critiques Naruto fanfiction. We intend to give honest critique and hope to help you get better at writing. We need a little more activity and hope to get the authors in that are already in the library to join the site and help other authors with their intel, hence get less crap or even avoid the crap that seems to litter FF.net nowadays and help improve you as a writer.