- This is awesome. :-)
It's so well written and descriptive.
I love it.
Author's responseThat makes me smile. I didn't find this chapter too intersting, because it's just set up for the next one. I promise, it gets more interesting than this. (at least I think so)
(#) BurlesqueQueen 2007-03-24You write really beautifully.
I like this a whole lot.
Updating soon would make me happy :-)
Author's responseI think tonight will make you very very happy (I'm heading over to post the next chapter as soon as I finish typing this)
p.s. thank you for all the kind words
- Can you say ambiance? Cause I can rate it ambiance.
I know I'm being repetitive but your writing style is lovely.
And Andy stories are few and far between so this is a welcome change.
I still love it xx
Author's response: ) I'd had an absolultey horrible day, but reading all this reviews have made it so much better. Thank you for the rating points. I'm estatic that you are enjoying this story as much as I am.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-27Yeah I'm with the other girls on this, I rated it as Ambience. What I loved about this chapter is how you described both Lindsey and Andy as feeling as though they weren't connecting with that day. I adore this in stories.
Again, you have an exceptional attention to detail and pelase don't let it wear off. I hae enjoyed every syllable of this so far and I'm greatly greatly greatly excited about what's in store.
I will be recommending this to my DoJ Hoes to read...
You may continue.....
Author's responseWow! compliments, rating points, and recommendations all in one review. I honestly can't stop smiling. The great response I'm getting to this story is in turn getting me just as excited to share it with you. Thank you, again. I don't think I can say it enough.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-31Again, for this chapter, all the points are taken... so sad for me...
Anyway... I already LOVE Andy in this story... I love Lindsey too but that's beside the point...
Ok, so sorry this review lacks any real substance, I'm multitasking, but just know that I think it's fantastic as I click onward to the next chapter... ;)
Author's responseMulti-tasking is no problem. I still love your reviews. And to be honest, I'm multitasking to: talking on the phone/answering reviews/avoiding homework haha. Hope you enjoy the newest chapter.
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