"Suffer, all of you...my children."
Your sentences aren't awkward. I like the way yo write. It's amazing. It ust sees to breathe the mystery even more. Please, keep up the good work. This has to be one of the best fanfictions that I've read in an extremely long time, so please update soon!!
Don't do that, i like this fic and it's true the structure can be a bit weird sometimes but that's how you write. No one's perfect - I'm certainly not.
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